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October 2024 Critiques

Time for another monthly critiques and as always we cover a TON of topics! I always recommend you watch more than just your critique as there’s so much to be learned from the work of others!

Part 1

In part 1 you’ll find:

  • Balancing brightness
  • Editing eyes
  • Where the viewer’s eye goes/where the attention goes/how the viewer moves through your image/the viewer’s journey
  • Masking errors
  • Looking into the light
  • Background elements (particularly in more simple portraits)
  • White balance
  • Exposure
  • Mood
  • Composition / Crop
  • Colours
  • Black holes/areas of darkness
  • Desaturating the dog/colour casts/removing blue tones from the coat
  • Add flowers/foliage to the foreground using a brush, or copy/pasting part of the image, expanding, and blurring it
  • How colours affect the mood/story/atmosphere
  • Harsh light and evening out light
  • Portrait vs landscape orientation
  • Oversharpening 
  • Adding motion blur
  • Symmetry and balance
  • Horizons, water, the angle/tilt of a photo
  • Faceless photos
  • Perspective/height
  • Gaussian blur
  • Little editing issues and general editing things (as always)
  • Fringing / chromatic aberration 
  • Generative expand

Remember, you can always click the transcript button on vimeo, and search for a particular term (eg., “Generative’) to be able to jump to that part of the video.

Ps. Are these summaries useful?

Part 2

In part 2 you’ll find:

  • Leaf overlays and depth of field, believability, etc
  • Eyes & pupils
  • Dogs getting lost in the dark
  • Pose and composition
  • White balance
  • Strong vignettes
  • Make a dog pop
  • Add punch, vibrance & pop to an image
  • Camera settings
  • Perspective/height
  • Sharpening / underexposing
  • Editing things as always
  • Backgrounds
  • Brightening the dog
  • Lens flare/light haze
  • Generative expand
  • Background flip
  • Bracketing / taking photos with bright skies 
  • Generative fill
  • Crop / Composition
  • Visual space/visual weight
  • Content aware scale
  • High vs low contrast

January 2024 Critiques

So many topics covered again this month! Including:

  • camera settings and slow shutter speeds
  • focusing on the eye
  • light conditions
  • editing (generative fill/generative expand issues – no generative demonstrations this month!), editing light, adding light rays, white balance, some issues with warm highlights and blue shadows, making the dog pop/not get lost in the dark, some discussion on contrast, some things around editing eyes. 
  • composition, particularly composition/space issues with the dog straight on to the camera but looking to the side.
  • location, using a location, tunnels, frames, backgrounds, where the dog is looking, their expression in that location, etc. 

Apologies in advance, I started in the MIDDLE of these photos (number 33, where the squiggly line is)… got to about #36, then went to the start of the photos of part 2. Lilo (#32) ended up at the very END of part 1 (I think). 

February 2023 Critiques

As always, such a great variety of photos and topics covered! Let’s see if I can remember them:

  • the story we’re telling or what we’re showing/saying about the dog’s personality, and particularly how the location, pose, gazing direction etc can affect that (yes, this is a bit of a deep and abstract topic but it came up more than once!)
  • camera settings
  • small editing things
  • composition
  • light & location

I felt like my brain wasn’t cooperating quite as well as normal in these critiques so I hope you all find them useful still!

October 2022 Critiques

Soooooo many topics covered this month!

But the main thing that stood out was our subjects getting lost in the dark.

This seems to be a common theme when people start learning with me, and something I need to reflect on in my teaching, as it means somewhere along the way I’m not explaining something well enough.

The fact of the matter is, we need to be able to see our subjects.

There are very few times that I would want my entire image so dark that my subject is blending in with its surroundings. 

This is one of the few images of mine I can think of where I really wanted EVERYTHING dark… and even then I made sure to photoshop enough “light” hitting Loki’s back that he was visible. 

As one of your final editing steps, you should be checking the histogram. Is everything bunched up down the shadows end? Or do you use the full spectrum of light? If your dog has a white face or white stripe, are those whites as white as they can be? Can you SEE your subject clearly??? 

Editing in dark/dim ambient light settings or with your screen brightness turned up can alter how you perceive the brightness of your images. It’s worth calibrating your screen and making sure the brightness is appropriate for the ambient light of the space you’re editing in.

The last step for pretty much ALL my photos is to add +.10 to +.30 exposure, because I know I tend to edit dark. This stretches the histogram so I’m using the full spectrum of light and despite the photo being “dark and moody”, still feels vibrant and clear.

Other things we covered include:

  • Adding a pop of brightness and vibrance to the face
  • Composition
    • Gazing direction
    • Content aware scale
    • Content aware crop
    • Content aware fill
    • Rule of thirds
  • Using natural light
  • Perspective
  • Colour casts
  • Camera settings
  • SHaping the light
  • Location
    • Story
    • distractions

And probably more that I’ve forgotten now.

September 2022 Critiques

As always, heaps of topics covered in this critique session, including:

  • using the histogram to help with editing
  • losing the dog in darkness
  • moderating light; fixing highlights, raising shadows, making light “in balance”
  • dodge and burn for depth
  • over-sharpening
  • colour casts
  • connection between multiple subjects
  • white balance
  • composition with subjects of different sizes/heights
  • exploring different photographic elements to show/tell more about the story or personality
  • fixing weird edges from Photoshop
  • side light
  • posing

August 2022 Critiques

Once again, a great range of topics covered in these critiques, including:

  • haze
  • shaping the light, vignettes and adding darkness in open spaces
  • keeping things a bit more natural
  • composition
  • the journey through an image
  • distractions

So actually, an interesting mix of what I would consider more “higher concept” topics, which is really cool to see! Means you guys are thinking of things, trying different editing techniques and styles, finding what works, getting your camera settings and lighting conditions sorted. Love it!

Sorry if there’s a bit of “lack of energy” in this video. I’ve had a rough few days.